Another New Site For Review

[jmoore04]

Howdy Everyone,

 

I have dreaded the idea of posting my site for review after reading reviews of other's sites. But I guess you could still take a gander at the site that I have put in over three weeks of straight man hours in creating.

 

I mainly focused on a clean organized look for the site and worked everything into it. You will notice some of the foreground modifications that I have made. I have also made several background modifications to the site in order to achieve what I wanted it to do.

 

Don't get me wrong, this is still a work in progress, and I am still working on various areas of the site in order to improve them. Everyday, I come up with at least one or two improvements.

 

For now, check out what I have, and feel free to make any comments of improving the site to be a lot better. I am about out of ideas right now.

 

Oh, and I have checked my site with the following browsers, everything seemed to look ok, but a couple older and unpopular browsers had a small display problem. The following browser have been screen-shot checked:

 

- Konqueror 3.0.5 - Linux - 800x600

- Konqueror 3.0.5 (no Flash) - Linux - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.6 - Linux - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.6 (no Flash) - Linux - 800x600

- Netscape 4.8 - Linux - 800x600

- Netscape 4.8 (no Flash) - Linux - 800x600

- Netscape 7.0 - Linux - 800x600

- Netscape 7.0 (no Flash) - Linux - 800x600

- Explorer 5.2 - Macintosh - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.6 - Macintosh - 800x600

- Netscape 7.0 - Macintosh - 800x600

- Opera 6.0 - Macintosh - 800x600

- Safari 1.0 - Macintosh - 800x600

- AOL 7.0 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 5.0 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 5.0 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 5.5 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 5.5 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 6.0 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 6.0 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.5 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.5 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 4.78 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 4.78 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 6.2 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 6.2 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 7.0 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Netscape 7.0 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Opera 7 - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Opera 7 (no Flash) - Win 2000 - 800x600

- Explorer 4.0 - Win 98 - 800x600

- Explorer 4.0 (no Flash) - Win 98 - 800x600

- Explorer 6.0 - Win XP - 800x600

- Explorer 6.0 (no Flash) - Win XP - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.6 - Win XP - 800x600

- Mozilla 1.6 (no Flash) - Win XP - 800x600

- Netscape 7.1 - Win XP - 800x600

- Netscape 7.1 (no Flash) - Win XP - 800x600

- Opera 7 - Win XP - 800x600

- Opera 7 (no Flash) - Win XP - 800x600

 

Oh yeah, I better give you my site address, or this post would be useless. The address is: http://www.wvmall.com

[OrbitBob]

Speed and layout fine for me. I liked the blue scheme however I'm afraid the orange was not something I liked at all. The blue tint to the jpeg about your departments sidebar looked nice, however I wasn't really sure that the actual photo fit in with the 'Retail savings' branding.

 

Couple of grammatical issues found on shipping.php;

1)While we try to limit them, defects will occur and is part of the business processes. [should be...will occur and are part? I also wouldn't advise including this at all]

 

2)If you have any questions if you received all of your products, check your receipt or contact us and we find out if you received everything.

[Might want to rewrite this statement as it is confusing]

 

I found product thumbnail to be too small in some cases but I'll admit to lmisplacing my reading glasses! Product info pages looked clean and loaded quickly for me.

Good luck,

Robbie

[jmoore04]

Thanks Robbie. I am actually in the middle of rewritting the whole shipping policy.

[rseigel]

You really need to change your logo. If someone from Walmart sees that you'll be in crap up to your eyeballs.

 

I've seen seen that exact template somewhere before (it was a UK site someone is building a PostNuke site around). The question is....who stole whos? Did you do this yourself or is it a TemplateMonster template (or something like that)? I'll try to find the URL so others can see and compare.

[jmoore04]

The template was purchased from TemplateMonster. The logo, I will work on, it was just something thrown together real quick, while the other one was being designed.