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I have implemented all the changes that were brought to my attention. Thanks for all your help. Please take a look now and let me know what you think.

 

 

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Only a personal preference - but I think you may need to move some of the text from the front page onto separate pages. There is a lot of information there.

 

Have links on the front page to the separate pages.

 

And maybe have some of that info in your meta-tag description.

 

I am no expert though.

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I like the site, but you must remember, people's attention span when shopping on the internet is like a goldfish- like 5 seconds between clicks UNTILL they find what they think they want.

 

I think you would do better to break up the information about your lure construction and design into managable 2 or 3 sentance chunks, and include a complimentary image to show what you are talking about.

 

You are trying to sell people who come to your site on your superior lures for SERIOUS fisherman- a salesman points out how his products are different, and shows examples of this.

My advice comes in two flavors- Pick the one that won't offend you.

 

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i would take out the visitor stats/counter - don't give your competitors that info.

 

Were glad you finally made it. should be we're.

 

Maybe some paragraph breaks:

 

Were glad you finally made it. <here>

We offer superior tournament grade tackle for the SERIOUS Fishermen. <here>

If you

 

 

Free shipping sign - maybe have in a more prominent position - right of your logo. And the paypal verified logo to the left of your logo.

 

Sorry I am probably just being picky. BUT you can get your own back here:

 

http://www.oscommerce.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=78987&st=20

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yes lookin good - with the paypal logo i meant put the paypal verified one at the top - just gives more creadance to a web site.

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