Just about ready to open up, any feedback appreciated

[Pipeloops]

Hi all,

 

I'm just about ready to open up my store for sample sets for the Hauptwerk virtual pipe organ. Everything should be working, so please don't actually order anything yet (well, I'll just ignore orders until the store is actually open), but do have a look at my pages.

BTW, until I really open up, Paypal pages goes into the sandbox ;-)

Pipeloops online store

 

BTW, store supports english and german

 

Many thanks

Reiner

[Guest]

OK, here goes:

 

1) The logo is jagged and looks amateurish, and what's with the house?

2) There is some German text on the English page "Willkommen im". There is also a typo on the front page - "detailled" should be "detailed".

3) Your box corners aren't right - the background is white and should be grey.

4) You've still got the standard oscommerce buttons.

5) You've used 'german' throughout when it should be 'German'.

6) You have no contact information.

7) REALLY don't like the colour scheme

 

 

What are you actually selling?

 

At first I thought it was something to do with pipes as in plumbing. There needs to be far more on the front page that really tells the customer instantly what this shop is for, otherwise they will just click away.

 

This needs a LOT more work yet.

[monster061]

OK, here goes:

 

1) The logo is jagged and looks amateurish, and what's with the house?

2) There is some German text on the English page "Willkommen im". There is also a typo on the front page - "detailled" should be "detailed".

3) Your box corners aren't right - the background is white and should be grey.

4) You've still got the standard oscommerce buttons.

5) You've used 'german' throughout when it should be 'German'.

6) You have no contact information.

7) REALLY don't like the colour scheme

What are you actually selling?

 

At first I thought it was something to do with pipes as in plumbing. There needs to be far more on the front page that really tells the customer instantly what this shop is for, otherwise they will just click away.

 

This needs a LOT more work yet.

 

I share this opinion.

[dmacus]

pretty good, but you could brighten up the colours and also design the logo better!