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[simeonfeng]

Dear forumers,

 

I think have brought my first on-line shop alive now. Everything looks to me is OK. Functionally. I have not yet put in the actual product photo and contents. It will be done when the goods are ready next week.

 

I got the idea here and there in the forums. Now please have a look into my shop and give me your valuable thoughs about it. Thanks a lot.

 

my on line shop: www.i-am-car.com/catalog/

[rommany]

Hello Simeon

 

I would lose the welcome/login part and apart from the header.

 

The rest is the normal stuff we see from day to day.

 

The header confused me a little, the reason why is when i frst saw it i thought it was going to be a kids/baby product site, and a second thing i noticed is that unless it spelt different in america cusion is spelt cushion.

 

Im not being rude just telling you how i see it, other than that its clean and a great start.

 

Good luck

 

PS

 

My partner thought your header said i am gay.com so would change the font if i was you : )

[Kerosene]

In the categories menu I think you should capitalize the first letter of each entry.

Also get rid of the requests counter at the bottom of the page.

 

There's a couple of grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad.

 

I think your design is good - the colours remind me of Singapore! :)

[tina_boots]

Dear forumers,

 

I think have brought my first on-line shop alive now. Everything looks to me is OK. Functionally. I have not yet put in the actual product photo and contents. It will be done when the goods are ready next week.

 

I got the idea here and there in the forums. Now please have a look into my shop and give me your valuable thoughs about it. Thanks a lot.

 

my on line shop: www.i-am-car.com/catalog/

 

The first thing I noticed when accessing your site was that my popup blocker went off. I would suggest getting rid of whatever is causing that. My first impression when I access a site with popups is not very favorable towards the site in question.

 

The overall color scheme of your site is pleasant. As someone else remarked to remove the counter, I would suggest removing that entire line, perhaps that is what the person meant, because it seems out of place. Also in regards to the general look of the bottom of your product pages, because the vertical space taken up by the info boxes, it continues down much further than the products section. Since there is no border or anything on the right hand side it gives a feeling of lack of order. I would suggest either adding some sort of border or boundary on the right hand side or doing something with the infoboxes to take up less vertical space. You also have several infoboxes with a blue header, then two with an orange header, then back to blue. Make them all the same color.

 

I would also suggest changing the text of "Top" in the breadcrumbs to something like "Home".

 

Be well,

Tina

[simeonfeng]

Thank you so much for your feedbacks. That is valuable. I will trim the site to be better.

[simeonfeng]

Hello Simeon

 

I would lose the welcome/login part and apart from the header.

 

The rest is the normal stuff we see from day to day.

 

The header confused me a little, the reason why is when i frst saw it i thought it was going to be a kids/baby product site, and a second thing i noticed is that unless it spelt different in america cusion is spelt cushion.

 

Im not being rude just telling you how i see it, other than that its clean and a great start.

 

Good luck

 

PS

 

My partner thought your header said i am gay.com so would change the font if i was you : )

Dear Rommany, firstly, thank for your feedback.

What do you mean "lose the welcome part and apart from the heade"?

I designed the logo myself thinking of to make the car accessories shop a fresher and cute look. I didn't notice it looks like "i am gay". But it might too troublesome to change that since all my sticker and wrapping page are printed with this logo. I should post it earlier to know this.

[simeonfeng]

The first thing I noticed when accessing your site was that my popup blocker went off. I would suggest getting rid of whatever is causing that. My first impression when I access a site with popups is not very favorable towards the site in question.

 

The overall color scheme of your site is pleasant. As someone else remarked to remove the counter, I would suggest removing that entire line, perhaps that is what the person meant, because it seems out of place. Also in regards to the general look of the bottom of your product pages, because the vertical space taken up by the info boxes, it continues down much further than the products section. Since there is no border or anything on the right hand side it gives a feeling of lack of order. I would suggest either adding some sort of border or boundary on the right hand side or doing something with the infoboxes to take up less vertical space. You also have several infoboxes with a blue header, then two with an orange header, then back to blue. Make them all the same color.

 

I would also suggest changing the text of "Top" in the breadcrumbs to something like "Home".

 

Be well,

Tina

Thanks Tina. I notice the dis-aligned of left column and the front page. I think it may be helpful to space the boxes in the left column. The stock templete has some space vertically inbetween the boxes. But I do not what caused my squezzed box. Do you have any idea to adjust this?

[HSMagic]

Not a bad site, it did kick off my pop up blocker.

 

Spelled... Spelled... :D

[♥toyicebear]

IMPORTANT..get rid of the damn po-up / pop-under which is causing the pop-up blocker to get in effect on your front page.

 

1. nice site..even though its just a slight mod of a pre-made template...

 

2. your design/color choice might be slightly of target.

 

3. For lanuages you have a Turkish flag, clicking on it just gives the same english text

[tina_boots]

Thanks Tina. I notice the dis-aligned of left column and the front page. I think it may be helpful to space the boxes in the left column. The stock templete has some space vertically inbetween the boxes. But I do not what caused my squezzed box. Do you have any idea to adjust this?

 

I don't think the infoboxes themselves are an issue, just the fact that they make the left hand side of the page very long and out of proportion with the main body. That section will no doubt grow longer as things like reviews will become filled in. This is only my opinion of course but I feel that you need some sort of border on the right hand side and probably something for a bottom border as well. That I feel will make the appearance of your pages be well defined.

 

Be well,

Tina

[simeonfeng]

IMPORTANT..get rid of the damn po-up / pop-under which is causing the pop-up blocker to get in effect on your front page.

 

1. nice site..even though its just a slight mod of a pre-made template...

 

2. your design/color choice might be slightly of target.

 

3. For lanuages you have a Turkish flag, clicking on it just gives the same english text

 

Thanks for your words. But one thing to be clear, the flag showing now is flag of Singapore. It is english by default.

[illumina_foxz]

Hello Simeon

 

I would lose the welcome/login part and apart from the header.

 

The rest is the normal stuff we see from day to day.

 

The header confused me a little, the reason why is when i frst saw it i thought it was going to be a kids/baby product site, and a second thing i noticed is that unless it spelt different in america cusion is spelt cushion.

 

Im not being rude just telling you how i see it, other than that its clean and a great start.

 

Good luck

 

PS

 

My partner thought your header said i am gay.com so would change the font if i was you : )

 

LoL..

I was just thinking the same thing. I thought it'll be kids/baby product site.. The logo's kinda cute up there. lol

[timon]

Hi,

I just had a look at you site and I think it looks good - it's user friendly with good descriptions and good pictures, overall I think it will do well in the right target market. The grey writting over the white is too hard to see, you need to make the writting darker.

 

In return I would really appreciate if I could get some feedback from you too -

My website has been running now for 3 months and has had thousands of unique visitors, but no one has ordered. Can you please give me any feedback of what you think about the products, prices, and the website in general, I would really appreciate it!!! The website is - www.naturalbodyskincare.com

 

Much Appreciated and Merry Christmas to You!

 

Cheers

Timon

[simeonfeng]

Hi,

I just had a look at you site and I think it looks good - it's user friendly with good descriptions and good pictures, overall I think it will do well in the right target market. The grey writting over the white is too hard to see, you need to make the writting darker.

 

In return I would really appreciate if I could get some feedback from you too -

My website has been running now for 3 months and has had thousands of unique visitors, but no one has ordered. Can you please give me any feedback of what you think about the products, prices, and the website in general, I would really appreciate it!!! The website is - www.naturalbodyskincare.com

 

Much Appreciated and Merry Christmas to You!

 

Cheers

Timon

 

Dear Timon, thanks for your feedbacks.

 

I had a look into your shop. Here is my two cents:

1. The fontpage is too long. I have to scroll all the way to view all. And normally, people should not be so patient to read all these.

2. You should put somewhere the detail of who you are. At least a phone no or office address will give people a impression that you are "real" exist.

3. I don't know how you get the figure of individual visits. But how many has joint in as member?

 

I am also new to all these. Had got the first deal closed this morning after some post at the dedicated forums.

:thumbsup: Very small amount, but it lights up my hope.

 

Wish all of you merry christmas.

[Guest]

Look at the footer - the word "proudly" is spelled wrong.

[simeonfeng]

Look at the footer - the word "proudly" is spelled wrong.

:blush:

 

Thanks moonlingt. I really appreciate your carefullness. Updated.