Guest Posted November 3, 2005 Posted November 3, 2005 It is a long time I'm not here! My home page has a new look. Please give some suggestions. http://www.ccyjchk.com/
hubcat Posted November 15, 2005 Posted November 15, 2005 Ok, I realize that your english is far superior to my Chinese, but that said, the english is not very good. You need to have a native enlish speaker re-write a lot of the areas to make them sound correct. The Privacy Policy section sounds pretty good - did someone help you with that? Also, I think the "Submarine" line at the top must be a Chinese idiom, because it makes no sense in english. Good luck, Adrienne
Mediajuggle Posted November 15, 2005 Posted November 15, 2005 yea i don't get thw whole "submarine" thing either... My Contribution Music Download Store Template http://www.oscommerce.com/community/contributions,4275
mintpeel Posted November 15, 2005 Posted November 15, 2005 yea i don't get thw whole "submarine" thing either... Submarines sink, dive perhpas he means that his programmes do not sink, crash dive bomb etc. :(
Guest Posted November 16, 2005 Posted November 16, 2005 Thanks for your suggestions. About the Privacy Policy section, original form is from the Privacy found on Mozilla. I modified a little bit contents and insert some new. So, you will find that "smooth". "Submarine? We only make sophisticated programs." I want to tell my programs are also sophisticated(spending a lot of time), just like to assemble submarines.
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