catagory Posted February 5, 2005 Posted February 5, 2005 Just wanting to see what the public thinks. Aiming for a clean, fun, adult toy site. Any suggestions and critisism welcome. Thanks, Mike www.sweetnessandspice.com
mark27uk3 Posted February 5, 2005 Posted February 5, 2005 Hi Mike, On first impressions it needs more spice, a lot more! Mark Lifes a bitch, then you marry one, then you die!
Simplyeasier Posted February 5, 2005 Posted February 5, 2005 Just wanting to see what the public thinks. Aiming for a clean, fun, adult toy site.Any suggestions and critisism welcome. Thanks, Mike www.sweetnessandspice.com <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hi Mike What makes your site different ? - I know you've worked hard on it - what I mean is why is this different to any other adult site out there ? Give me a reason to bookmark your site. The layout is stock osC (not a bad thing) but that is not a differentiator. The colors are interesting - but again whats different about the combination you use ? Think of using different color in your words to emphasise product attributes, use of products - and loose the etc The products are intersting - but why would a person buy from you rather than from another site ? You need a differentiator to amke the site stand out - visit a few similar sites and make a list of what you find attractive AND ofputting and then use those ideas to enhance your own site. Another of my pet comments when I visit sites is make the shopping experience as simple and easy for your customer as possible. Think of reducing the size of your page to 750 - many of your customers surf on 800 x 600 - make them scroll up and down - expected - make them scroll left and right and you loose them. hth Charles A kite flies highest AGAINST the wind ! "Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, a lover in one hand, martini in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming ~ WOO HOO!! What a ride!"
insyspider Posted February 5, 2005 Posted February 5, 2005 I think it's great. I don't understand all the "fuss" over "stock OSC stores". I showed your site to my wife, as I thought you might be interested in a woman's opinion. Following is what she found. Your wording makes me feel "safe" in shopping there, and that's what is important to me. Your wording also gives some "class" to your product, which also makes me more comfortable in wanting to shop there. Here are some minor things I found, mostly in the line of "typos". Under "Refunds" you have "We happy to arrange". Are you a division of Zillion Ltd or S&S Ventures, you say it both ways. Your "Conditions of Use" page is blank. I would remove the link from the infobox. In your "Newsletters" section, you have "monthly news letters"; it should be "monthly newletter" to match the way you show it elsewhere. Good luck. I like your site.
Simplyeasier Posted February 5, 2005 Posted February 5, 2005 I think it's great. I don't understand all the "fuss" over "stock OSC stores". <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Stock osC is great - but it is a starting point At the start of the race everyone is equal and there is no differentiation - the winners are not decided until they hit the tape - If you are in business and don't think you are in a race or competition do the math :D ) To win more of those (few) disposable dollars, pounds and Kiwi currency (what do they use in New Zealand ?) you must make yourself "different" (note not better) to the rest ! Charles A kite flies highest AGAINST the wind ! "Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, a lover in one hand, martini in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming ~ WOO HOO!! What a ride!"
burt Posted February 6, 2005 Posted February 6, 2005 Stock osC is great - but it is a starting point At the start of the race everyone is equal and there is no differentiation - the winners are not decided until they hit the tape - <{POST_SNAPBACK}> An excellent Analogy. For the original poster: I like your "online reads" logo - can you redesign the site around that Logo? - use the purples, use shadows. Shadows always look good if done right. The rest of the site does not give an X-factor or even a XXX-factor ;)
AfterDark Posted February 6, 2005 Posted February 6, 2005 Something along your lines in osc that stands out a bit more... Pretty In Pink Maybe you can get some ideas?
Guest Posted February 6, 2005 Posted February 6, 2005 no title on main index page no mention of 28 usc for age requirements (certain states are 18, others are 21) so this could get you nailed by 'Big Brother' insde is too plain
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